#applepelt tf

[mousetoe-wc]

Palebird Rewritten Family Tree! My First Windclan Family tree rewrite! Windclan was surprisingly easy for me. Now on to the Notes:

Tallpoppy and Applefur of Shadowclan and Tawnyfur of Windclan are the kids of Rabbitear. Tallpoppy and Applefur were stolen during into the wild when windclan was being chased out by shadowclan.

Rabbitear died in the battle and Tawnyfur was nursed/raised by Ashfoot and Morningflower, Gorsekit, Tawnykit and Eaglekit were inseparable.

Wrenflight is Onewhiskers mother because I find considering the Windclan leader problems in TNP.

[burning-thistles-bt]

So... I've been inspired by your AU and have kinda made my own version of it. There's a lot of changes, such as names and relationships (for example, Thistleclaw also went after Willowpelt when she was still an apprentice), plus a lot more creep factor in the other Clans (Finchflight has become a decent guy, he's Amberleaf's mate and the father of Tallpoppy and Applepelt (Applefur from TF), but Brokenstar... yeah I made Brokenstar a lot worse), so it's by no means a direct copy, just a similar starting idea

Also Hattie takes the role of Fireheart in terms of the canon story, Darkstripe and Longtail are littermates and both actually good guys, and this Frostfur is actually hugely sympathetic and sticks up for her friends Spottedleaf and Willowpelt, to the point where Willowpelt trusts her with Greystripe's father being Flintfang of ShadowClan and she promises to take the secret to her grave if she must. There's still some victim blaming but it's from other characters, though one of them is a tragedy herself since she was in a similar situation...

Oh, wow!

Hi, Alder here, and we're glad that our story has inspired you to write your own! I personally know the feeling lol

It sounds like you've got a lot planned out already, and I love the similar yet slight difference you've made!

The idea of bringing Hattie in as a pseudo firestar is an interesting and definitely original idea!

We wish you luck on your writing journey! Welcome to the club lol

Lolling feel free to edit this to add your own thoughts!

Lolling’s edit to add: this is an awesome story idea!!!!! I’m so glad BT could inspire you <3333 (also supportive Frostfur yes~~~~)